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Description

Some scripts do not need notes. They need someone alongside them for the whole climb.

Intensive Care takes a project from wherever it is now, a logline, a synopsis, a stalled draft, and works it through to a first draft you can send out. Three rounds. Each round is a document from you, a set of notes from me, and a call to work out what the notes mean and what to do next. Between rounds, you write.

This is not a rewrite service. The writing stays yours. What changes is that you stop writing into the dark, and the structural problems get caught at outline stage instead of on page 70 of a draft you have already fallen in love with.

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Intensive Care

We take your project from wherever it is now to a first draft, over three rounds of notes and calls.

Best for A project that needs more than one round

You send Whatever you have now
You get Three rounds of notes and calls
Turnaround Allow 8 to 12 weeks

US$1,850

Next available start: October 3, 2026

All fees in US$ Category — Script Services

What happens next

  1. 01 We email you an upload link
  2. 02 You send your whatever you have now
  3. 03 Your three rounds of notes and calls comes back within Allow 8 to 12 weeks

Please note

Payment can be split into three instalments across the twelve-week engagement, quoted in your proposal.

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