Intensive Care
I take your project from wherever it is now to a first draft, over three rounds of notes and calls.
US$1,750
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4 services
One reader — K. Segers
All fees in US$
WHERE IS THE PROJECT?
Service
You send · You get · Turnaround
Price in US$
Pitch Deck Notes
A read of the document you send before the script exists, and an honest answer on whether it sells the project.
20 pages
Pitch deck or lookbook, up to 20 pages · Written report · 14 days
Pitch deck or lookbook, up to 20 pages
Written report
14 days
US$225
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Story Notes
Feedback on your concept, point of view, character and structure, from a synopsis rather than a full draft.
Up to 5 pages or 2,000 words
Synopsis · Written report + Zoom · 21 days
Synopsis
Written report + Zoom
21 days
US$275
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Script Notes
Most booked
A full read of your feature screenplay and a written report on what works, what does not, and what to fix first.
Feature screenplay to 110 pages
Feature screenplay · A written report of four pages or more, a scorecard, and scene notes · 21 days
Feature screenplay
A written report of four pages or more, a scorecard, and scene notes
21 days
US$495
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Script Notes, two drafts
Advice via Zoom on story and style over three stages: a draft, a step outline, and a next draft. Written reports back it all up.
Up to 120 pages
A feature screenplay · 3 Zoom sessions and 3 reports · 3 weeks to the first session; up to 10 weeks in total
A feature screenplay
3 Zoom sessions and 3 reports
3 weeks to the first session; up to 10 weeks in total
US$875
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Specialist
Series Pilot
A read of your pilot script or your series bible, with notes on whether the show holds up past episode one.
Pilot script or series bible · Written report + scorecard · 21 days
Pilot script or series bible
Written report + scorecard
21 days
US$400
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Short Film Notes
A read of your short script and a written report on concept, structure, dialogue and scene design.
20 pages
Short script, up to 20 pages · Written report + scorecard · 21 days
Short script, up to 20 pages
Written report + scorecard
21 days
US$195
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Extras
Synopsis Writing
I read your finished script and write the submission ready synopsis for you.
Source screenplay to 110 pages
Feature screenplay, up to 110 pages · 1 to 2 page synopsis · 14 days
Feature screenplay, up to 110 pages
1 to 2 page synopsis
14 days
US$175
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DEVCON 3
Three days on site, in the room with your team, solving the problems before the deadline hits.
from US$6,500 plus travel
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