Description
Your script gets read the way a development executive reads it, and you get told what they would not tell you. Plot, pacing, tone, dialogue, point of view, style, scene design. On top of the craft, a read on how ready your concept, logline and premise are for the market you are aiming at.
The report runs four pages or more, with a scorecard. Problems are ranked, so you know which fix earns the most and which one can wait for the draft after this one.
Where a script runs long, we say where to cut. Producers do not read bloated scripts, and a 130 page feature is a decision the reader makes before page one.
Script Notes
A full read of your feature screenplay and a written report on what works, what does not, and what to fix first.
Best for A finished draft getting polite passes
US$495
After you pay
- 01 We email you an upload link
- 02 You send your feature screenplay
- 03 Your written report of four pages or more, a scorecard, and a condensed scene map comes back within 21 days
Please note
Documents over the maximum length are still read, for a fee. Producers don't like reading bloated documents, and neither does the market.
If the report does not give you at least three fixes you can act on, tell me within fourteen days and I will do a second pass at no charge.