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Description

Television asks a different question of a script than a feature does, and the pilot has to answer it in the first ten pages: is there a series here. We look at character design, concept marketability, episode structure, setting, genre, tone and pacing, and at whether the engine you have built can run for a season without repeating itself.

Send the pilot, the bible, or both. Pilot scripts up to 60 pages, bibles and pitch documents up to 30. You get four pages or more of written feedback and a scorecard.

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Series Pilot

A read of your pilot script or your series bible, with notes on whether the show holds up past episode one.

Best for A pilot about to go out to networks and streamers

You send Pilot script or series bible
You get Written report + scorecard
Turnaround 21 days

US$400

Delivery
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All fees in US$ Category — Script Services

After you pay

  1. 01 We email you an upload link
  2. 02 You send your pilot script or series bible
  3. 03 Your written report and scorecard comes back within 21 days

Please note

Documents over the maximum length are still read, for a fee. Producers don't like reading bloated documents, and neither does the market.

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