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Description

Three rounds of notes across three drafts, over twelve weeks, with a call between each.

For a script with a deadline and somewhere to go. The first round is a full read and a ranked report; you rewrite; the second round reads the rewrite against what the first one asked for; you rewrite again; the third round is the one that decides whether it is ready to send out.

What makes this different from booking three separate reads is that Karel is holding the whole arc: the second report knows what the first one said, and the third knows what you chose not to change and why. Most scripts do not need this. A script going to market with one shot at a particular producer does.

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Intensive Care

Notes across three drafts over 12 weeks, with calls between each. For a script going out to market.

Best for A script with a deadline and a market waiting for it

You send Your feature screenplay, then each rewrite as it lands
You get Three written reports across three drafts, with a call between each
Turnaround 12 weeks, three rounds

US$1,600

All fees in US$ Zoom call included Category — Script Services

After you pay

  1. 01 We email you an upload link
  2. 02 You send your feature screenplay, then each rewrite as it lands
  3. 03 Your three written reports across three drafts, with a call between each comes back within 12 weeks, three rounds

Please note

Documents over the maximum length are still read, for a fee. Producers don't like reading bloated documents, and neither does the market.

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