Intensive Care
We take your project from wherever it is now to a first draft, over three rounds of notes and calls.
US$1,850
Next start October 3, 2026
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7 services
One reader — K. Segers
All fees in US$
WHERE IS THE PROJECT?
Service
You send · You get · Turnaround
Price in US$
Logline Consultation
Half an hour on your logline with Karel Segers, founder of Logline It, until the sentence does its job.
One logline · 30-minute Zoom · 7 days
One logline
30-minute Zoom
7 days
US$95
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Pitch Deck Notes
A read of the document you send before the script exists, and an honest answer on whether it sells the project.
20 pages
Pitch deck or lookbook, up to 20 pages · Written report · 14 days
Pitch deck or lookbook, up to 20 pages
Written report
14 days
US$225
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Story Notes
Feedback on your concept, point of view, character and structure, from a synopsis rather than a full draft.
Synopsis to 5 pages or 2,000 words
Synopsis, 2 to 5 pages · Written report · 21 days
Synopsis, 2 to 5 pages
Written report
21 days
US$265
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Script Notes
Most booked
A full read of your feature screenplay and a written report on what works, what does not, and what to fix first.
Feature screenplay to 110 pages
Feature screenplay · A written report of four pages or more, a scorecard, and a condensed scene map · 21 days
Feature screenplay
A written report of four pages or more, a scorecard, and a condensed scene map
21 days
US$495
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Second Opinion
Your first cut is not working and you cannot see why. I watch it and tell you.
Cut to 120 minutes
A link to your cut · Written notes + a call · 14 days
A link to your cut
Written notes + a call
14 days
US$650
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Script Notes, two drafts
Advice via Zoom on story and style over three stages: a draft, a step outline, and a next draft. Written reports back it all up.
A feature screenplay to 110 pages
A feature screenplay to 110 pages
US$875
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Intensive Care
Notes across three drafts over 12 weeks, with calls between each. For a script going out to market.
Your feature screenplay, then each rewrite as it lands · Three written reports across three drafts, with a call between each · 12 weeks, three rounds
Your feature screenplay, then each rewrite as it lands
Three written reports across three drafts, with a call between each
12 weeks, three rounds
US$1,600
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Specialist
Series Pilot
A read of your pilot script or your series bible, with notes on whether the show holds up past episode one.
Pilot script or series bible · Written report + scorecard · 21 days
Pilot script or series bible
Written report + scorecard
21 days
US$400
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Short Film Notes
A read of your short script and a written report on concept, structure, dialogue and scene design.
20 pages
Short script, up to 20 pages · Written report + scorecard · 21 days
Short script, up to 20 pages
Written report + scorecard
21 days
US$195
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By enquiry
DEVCON 3
Three days on site, in the room with your team, solving the problems before the deadline hits.
from US$6,500 plus travel
Next start October 3, 2026
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